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I am making a precious plan for the winter break to enjoy with my family and my sisters. During the winter break, my sister's are coming to visit us OR I am going to stay home during the winter break. Because my sister's are coming to visit us.(Which sentence is better)? After they arrive, we will go for a special dinner. Second, we are going to go for shop a big shop, because my grandmom 's birthday is coming up and we are thinking to make something unique for her as always. Third, we will go for a movie as soon as my friends come. At the end, we are going to throw a get together party when my cousin's come from their business trip.
  

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I am making a precious plan for the winter break to enjoy with my family and my sisters. I am going to stay at home then because my sister's are going to visit us. After they arrive, we will go for a special dinner.

— Vsuresh

  • I am making a precious plan for the winter break to enjoy with my family and my sisters.
  • I am going to stay at home then because my sister's are going to visit us.
  • After they arrive, we will go for a special dinner.
  • Then, we are going to go for shop at (a big shop) a supermarket, because we are thinking to make something unique for my grandmother, as always as her birthday is coming up.
  • After that we have planned to go for a movie as soon as my friends come.
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I am making a precious plan for the winter break to enjoy with my family and my sisters. I am going to stay at home then because my sister's are going to visit us. After they arrive, we will go for a special dinner. Then, we are going to go for shop at (a big shop) a supermarket, because we are thinking to make something unique for my grandmother, as always as her birthday is coming
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