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Jiangyueming Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Would you mind helping me correct these three short sentences. Thank you.

When I am reading an academic passage, I feel sleepy. It's so boring. But If I listen music at the same time, I feel full of energy and wanna finish the assignment quickly.
  

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jiangyueming When I am reading an academic passage, I feel sleepy. It's so boring. But i f I listen to music at the same time, I feel full of energy and wanna finish the assignment quickly.

— Prajwalkr

  • jiangyueming When I am reading an academic passage, I feel sleepy.
  • It's so boring.
  • But i f I listen to music at the same time, I feel full of energy and wanna finish the assignment quickly.
  • I have edited your sentences.
  • I don't suggest that you use 'wanna'.
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jiangyueming When I am reading an academic passage, I feel sleepy. It's so boring. But if I listen to music at the same time, I feel full of energy and wanna finish the assignment quickly.
I have edited your sentences. I don't suggest that you use 'wanna'. It isn't wro
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Ok, I see. Thank you!
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