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Nguyễn Duy Hiệu Posted 4 years ago
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Agricultural development has a positive effect on people, but there is hunger in some parts of the world. Although many problems can cause this, steps can be taken to overcome it.
First of all, there is no doubt that the main problems that lead to food insecurity can be many. Low education leads to low self-esteem, which can be called one of the main causes of inadequate food supply. For example, residents of impoverished countries may have high birth rates without strict government controls, inadvertently leading to massive depletion of food supplies. In addition, the problem of hunger can arise as a result of successive wars between nations. Crops are destroyed and diseases spread to many regions; That is why people strive for peace and tranquility for their families, and hunger is not an exception.
Possible actions on this global problem can be solved through short-term and long-term campaigns. As for short-term plans, the creation of charitable foundations that can raise money to sponsor agricultural products and food for the poor is encouraged. In order to save them from military tragedies and infectious diseases, great importance should be given to medical and medical products. On the other hand, solutions to prevent nuclear conflicts and world wars are important in the long run. For example, the participation of international organizations and activists in protest wars is a positive sign that we are taking practical steps to reduce the thousands of hunger deaths.
In conclusion, although many reasons can lead to food shortages in many countries, I believe that this problem can be solved with appropriate corrective measures.

  

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