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3) Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.
To be creative and successful, I need to a have a different background, interest, and talent. This is what I believe, and also is my motivation to do everything in my life. During my life, I’ve experienced so many special moments really affected me deeply because of my background. I lived in Shanghai before. I met a lot of people from different countries and became their friends. I got some culture shock from them, and they also gave me the diverse ideologies changed my mind effectively. The most important thing was to have a global mindset while you got in the trouble or began planning a successful and challenging future. Days past, I move back to Taiwan now. I am looking for what I really want to do and what kind of future I want to have. The global mindset brings me a lot of ideas that I need to have a different interest. My interest is to involve in different extracurricular activities to meet different people and I believe that I can learn different things from them. I realized that I have so many Japanese friends so I started to learn Japanese try to understand more about them. This decision impacted my high school life. I won a competition which is to plan a trip for the backpacker in Kagawa, Japan and make a presentation. I spent a lot of time to know the history, the art museums, the people, the food and the views in Kagawa with my team. As the prize, we were entertained by Kagawa Prefecture Tourism Association. The competition explored my sight of Japan, the place I had never known and made me sure that the decision learning Japanese affected me a lot. The people in Kagawa just like the artist, the house, and the street will be painted and decorated by the resident. The guide told us that all resident know that they need to work a lot for appealing the feature of Kagawa. I saw how the Japanese love their country, their city, and how they show to the world the beauty of Japan.Japanese is the language that I loved and I found my talent on studying languages, culture and so on. My Japanese teacher always said that a language is a tool for understanding a country about their history, humanities, and cultures. I only learned Japanese for one year, and I started to take a reception of Japanese guest in our school. Due to I can speak Japanese and English, I helped to be the translator and the host for the special events in school. Languages are tools for communication and what I really enjoyed in. During speaking different languages at the different occasion with people, I learned so many things and it helped me on speaking in the public and knowing how to treat people who have a different background. My special background lets me found my interest and lead to my success now.