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Jiangyueming Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Would you mind help me correct three sentences. Thank you.

Supposed a computer lab requires 100 computers. The individual computer price is averagely 5000 RMB. In total, that's 5 hundred thousand RMB, which is almost five times than a hundred and twenty thousand RMB.
  

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First, correcting the simple errors: Supposed Suppose a computer lab requires 100 computers. The individual computer price is averagely , on average, 5000 RMB. In total, that's 5 hundred thousand 500,000 RMB, which is almost five times than a hundred and twenty thousand 120,000 RMB.

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  • First, correcting the simple errors: Supposed Suppose a computer lab requires 100 computers.
  • The individual computer price is averagely , on average, 5000 RMB.
  • In total, that's 5 hundred thousand 500,000 RMB, which is almost five times than a hundred and twenty thousand 120,000 RMB.
  • Next, rearranging sentence structures: Suppose a computer lab requires 100 computers.
  • The average individual computer price is , on average, 5000 RMB.
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First, correcting the simple errors:
Supposed Suppose a computer lab requires 100 computers. The individual computer price is averagely , on average, 5000 RMB. In total, that's 5 hundred thousand 500,000 RMB, which is almost five times than a hundred and twenty thousand 120,000 RMB.
Next, rearranging sentence struc
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