Would you mind giving me advices and my band score for this task 2

In today's society, due to the innovation of technology, reading is becoming much more easier than ever before, and printed newspaper and books will be no longer one of the main media. To a certain extent, i agree that people in the future will not buy printed newspapers or books. However, i disagree that online books will not require any payment.
On the one hand, the visible reason why people will not use printed products is that reading online will be prevalent because of its functions. Online media contains many categories such as sport news, headline news, novels. It can bring the convenience to readers, so that they can find what they want to read quickly by just touching the screen. Moreover, the readers are able to read more, so that online newspapers and books can pleasure their satisfaction. For example, a traveler with just only a smartphone can enjoy the long travelling distance by reading many kinds of book when ever he wants.
On the other hand, because of its convenience, online reading materials are not free to read. In order to read e-books or newspapers, the readers have to purchase because the authors and journalists are not working for fun. They spend their time to write products for selling. In addition, quality and accuracy are the main target that every publishers aim for, so that, if readers want to read excellent products, they have to pay more to get it. Take "The Guardian" for example, they only let the readers to read their products with an account which is paid by month or by year, depends on which option that the costumers choose.
In conclusion, it seems evident that online reading materials is becoming much more popular as the replacement for print media, but payment is definitely required.