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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Would you make any changes?

Hello!

Would you make any changes in here?

Rikko wishes not to return to Brazil because he goes to the school in the USA and has friends there. Furthermore, the boy no longer understands Portugese very well, and he does not know Spanish at all.

Thanks!
  

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"Rikko does not wish to return to Brazil" is the only thing I would change. Everything else sounds fine.

  • "Rikko does not wish to return to Brazil" is the only thing I would change.
  • Everything else sounds fine.
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"Rikko does not wish to return to Brazil" is the only thing I would change. Everything else sounds fine.
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AnonymousRikko wishes not to return to Brazil because he goes to the school in the USA
It depends. Is that part supposed to come after another in which you established which school in particular, you are talking about? If not, because you only need to say that Rikko goes to school in the USA, without specifying which one, you will not need the wo

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