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1. Buses pass this busstop at every certain time period.
2. The time interval of bus operation differs according to the passengers' demand.
3. Someone has arranged the bus operation every fiften minutes.
4. Transportation system circles around high population density.
5. People living in the low population density community have low busride chances.
6. People living in the low population density community are recorded low bususe turnout.
7. The building includes a big mart at the first floor.
8. The city has pushed for big market closing at every two weeks.
9. Some products have undergone severe price collapse.
10. Price-lowered products are only limited to those whose expiration date is not less a month away.
11. The display of fried chickens along the corridor attracts my attention with smells.
12. The rice products are already half-cooked; adding some heat for a minute in the microwave will do.

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

Hello, ruddvanni—and welcome to English Forums. Your sentences have many errors and infelicities of grammar or vocabulary, which I have underlined. Please try to correct them and post your revised sentences here.

1. Buses pass this busstop at every certain time period.
2. The time interval of bus operation differs according to the passengers' demand.
3. Someone has arranged the bus operation every fiften minutes.
4. Transportation system circles around high population density.
5. People living in the low population density community have low busride chances.
6. People living in the low population density community are recorded low bususe turnout.
7. The building includes a big mart at the first floor.
8. The city has pushed for big market closing at every two weeks.
9. Some products have undergone severe price collapse.
10. Price-lowered products are only limited to those whose expiration date is not less a month away.
11. The display of fried chickens along the corridor attracts my attention with smells.
12. The rice products are already half-cooked; adding some heat for a minute in the microwave will do.

Ruddvanni · Answer

Maybe this is what I can do best. Would you be kind to corret these?

1. Buses pass this bus stop at every certain time period.
2. The time interval of bus operation differs according to the passengers' demand.
3. Someone has arranged the bus operation at every fiften minutes.
4. Transportation system circles around high population density.
5. People living in the low population density communities have low bus-ride chances.
6. People living in the low population density communities are recorded low bus-use turnout.
7. The building includes a big mart in the first floor.
8. The city has pushed for big market closing in every two weeks.
9. Some products have undergone severe price collapse.
10. The price-lowered products are only limited to those whose expiration date is not less a month away.
11. The display of fried chickens along the corridor attracts my attention with smells.
12. The rice products are already half-cooked; adding some heat for a minute in the microwave will do.

Mister Micawber · Answer

I think the main problem is that you haven't learned the natural phrases yet.

1. Buses pass this bus stop at regular intervals.
2. The bus intervals vary according to passenger demand.
3.They have scheduled buses for every fifteen minutes.
4. The transportation system passes through areas of high population density.
5. People in sparsely populated areas have infrequent bus service.
6. People in sparsely populated areas have infrequent bus service.
7. The building includes a supermarket on the first floor.
8. The city has pushed for supermarket closing once every two weeks.
9. Some products have undergone severe price collapse.
10. The discounted products are limited to those whose expiration date is (not?) less than a month away.
11. The display of fried chicken along the aisle attracts my attention with its odor.
12. The rice products are already half-cooked; heating them for a minute in a microwave will do.

Ruddvanni · Answer

Exactly right! My mother tongue is quite different from English in every conceivable way. That's why I have to either go to the native country myself to learn English, or rely on this forum.
Thanks a lot. And, maybe I'll have a lot of more questions to ask.

Mister Micawber · Answer

ruddvanni And, maybe I'll have a lot of more questions to ask.

.-- OK, we'll be waiting!

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