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Hope your day is going well so far. I have put together a fly to be sent to the local businesses provided with some of the information you’ll be presenting. Would you check to see if I miss out anything that you will present?

Nona the brit · Accepted Answer

Hope your day is going well so far. I have put together a flyer with some of the information you’ll be presenting to be sent to the local businesses . Would you check to see if I have missed anything out?

BarbaraPA · Answer

Perhaps another BrE/AmE thing, but "if I have left anything out" - not "missed."

Anonymous · Answer

Please can you help to make the following sentences shorter and grammatically correct?

To alert you/your GP to any unexpected changes in your readings, helping them to make changes to your medication if necessary

To help identify white coat hypertension - where the pressure is markedly higher due to anxiety about seeing a doctor

To help pick out white coat effect - where the though of a doctor or nurse measuring your blood pressure, even though you know you have raised blood pressure and may even be on treatment, will still raise it even higher

Thank you

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