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Nancy19820 Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
Would you help me write this letter in a polite way & grammatical correct?
Thank you much in advance for your help.
Please review attached comments. Because of many changes have not been made, the department heads of ABC must see another proof before the final printing. “Happy Residence Care” business is operating illegally and it is critical that it be removed. If you are not able to remove it because of whatever reasons, then you’ll have to remove ABC from the map and we will not be part of this Map Project.
Please review attached comments. Because of many changes have not been made, the department heads of ABC must see another proof before the final printing. “Happy Residence Care” business is operating illegally and it is critical that it be removed. If you are not able to remove it because of whatever reasons, then you’ll have to remove ABC from the map and we will not be part of this Map Project.
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Nancy, this is a little confusing to me, so I'm not sure I have this right. Please review the attached for our comments. It seems that some of the changes requested have not been made, so we do need to see another proof fore review and approval before it goes to press.
- Nancy, this is a little confusing to me, so I'm not sure I have this right.
- Please review the attached for our comments.
- It seems that some of the changes requested have not been made, so we do need to see another proof fore review and approval before it goes to press.
- If there are reasons you couldn't make those changes, could you please call me to discuss them?
- Please note that "Happy Residence Care" is operating illagally and it is essential that it be removed.
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Nancy, this is a little confusing to me, so I'm not sure I have this right.
Please review the attached for our comments. It seems that some of the changes requested have not been made, so we do need to see another proof fore review and approval before it goes to press. If there are reasons you couldn't make those changes, could you please call me to discuss them?
Please note that
Please review the attached for our comments. It seems that some of the changes requested have not been made, so we do need to see another proof fore review and approval before it goes to press. If there are reasons you couldn't make those changes, could you please call me to discuss them?
Please note that
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