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Nancy19820 Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
Would you help me write this in a better way & gramatically correct?
Thank you much for your help.
Hi Nancy,
I don’t know whether Mike informed you the minimum requirement before I took over this task. It’s my fault that I did not read carefully that there’s a minimum requirement for riding the Zamboni at the game. I also thought that it would not be difficult to get 50 tickets sold because I placed 1,000 flyers to businesses around town.
He offered couple options to raise the number of ticket sold. He can call people that we think they might be interested in going to the game and email to all City employees.
Thank you,
Laura
Hi Nancy,
I don’t know whether Mike informed you the minimum requirement before I took over this task. It’s my fault that I did not read carefully that there’s a minimum requirement for riding the Zamboni at the game. I also thought that it would not be difficult to get 50 tickets sold because I placed 1,000 flyers to businesses around town.
He offered couple options to raise the number of ticket sold. He can call people that we think they might be interested in going to the game and email to all City employees.
Thank you,
Laura
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Hi Nancy, I don’t know whether Mike informed you about the minimum requirement before I took over this task. ] the game. I also thought that it would be easy to get 50 tickets sold , because I placed 1,000 flyers with businesses around town.
- Hi Nancy, I don’t know whether Mike informed you about the minimum requirement before I took over this task.
- ] the game.
- I also thought that it would be easy to get 50 tickets sold , because I placed 1,000 flyers with businesses around town.
- He has offered us a couple of options to increase the number of ticket sold.
- He can call people that we think might be interested in going to the game and he can also email all City employees.
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Hi Nancy,
I don’t know whether Mike informed you about the minimum requirement before I took over this task. It’s my fault that I did not read carefully that there’s a minimum number of passengers required [?] for riding the Zamboni at [to?] the game. I also thought that it would be easy to get 50 tickets sold, because I placed 1,
I don’t know whether Mike informed you about the minimum requirement before I took over this task. It’s my fault that I did not read carefully that there’s a minimum number of passengers required [?] for riding the Zamboni at [to?] the game. I also thought that it would be easy to get 50 tickets sold, because I placed 1,
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