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Nancy19820 Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Would you help me write the following in a better way?

I greally appreciate any comments or suggestions.



I, , agree to serve on the festival committee of Powder Springs for the term of 2007, which require me to attend eighty percent (85%) of the meeting dates. I also agree to follow the requirements describe as below.



  1. Must attend 85% of the meeting days

  2. Agree to serve minimum of 1 year

  3. Fill out an evaluation form of previous activities

  4. Meeting will be at 6:00 p.m. every last Thursday of the month

  5. Suggestions in the best interests of the businesses and citizens
  

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for 2007, which requires me to attend eighty-five percent (85%) of meetings held. I also agree to: 1. Attend 85% of the meetings 2.

  • for 2007, which requires me to attend eighty-five percent (85%) of meetings held.
  • I also agree to: 1.
  • Attend 85% of the meetings 2.
  • Serve a minimum of one year 3.
  • Complete an evaluation form regarding my previous activities 4.
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I'd suggest the following:

...for 2007, which requires me to attend eighty-five percent (85%) of meetings held. I also agree to:

1. Attend 85% of the meetings
2. Serve a minimum of one year
3. Complete an evaluation form regarding my previous activities
4. Work in the best interests of the local businesses and citizens

I don't think you need to state when th

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