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Nancy1982 Posted 20 years ago
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would you help me make this shorter and grammatically correct. Thank you
After examining the DAPS materials, attending meetings is necessary for me. I will attend meetings to seek for their comments and assistance in developing partnership with private sector when I finish with the ED draft.
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I'd like to help you, but your meaning isn't clear. Do you mean that you have examined the materials, and now believe that you must attend the meetings? Or do you mean that (in the future) you will have to first examine the materials and then attend the meetings?
- I'd like to help you, but your meaning isn't clear.
- Do you mean that you have examined the materials, and now believe that you must attend the meetings?
- Or do you mean that (in the future) you will have to first examine the materials and then attend the meetings?
- How does the ED draft relate to the partnerships with the private sector?
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I'd like to help you, but your meaning isn't clear.
Do you mean that you have examined the materials, and now believe that you must attend the meetings? Or do you mean that (in the future) you will have to first examine the materials and then attend the meetings?
How does the ED draft relate to the partnerships with the private sector?
Do you mean that you have examined the materials, and now believe that you must attend the meetings? Or do you mean that (in the future) you will have to first examine the materials and then attend the meetings?
How does the ED draft relate to the partnerships with the private sector?
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I have to examine the materials, and believe I must attend the meetings. The ED draft is an economic development strategy. It contains steps that I will use to implement to attract more businesses to the City. Developing partnership is one of the strategies. Since, I don't know anybody to be partner with me, so I need them to assist me with it.
Thank you for your help.
Thank you for your help.
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Okay, and whose meetings are you attending and who are the "they" who will provide you with the assistance?
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The examination of the Development Authority (DA) materials has confirmed that attending meetings (at their location??) is an important step which I need to take. The ensuing participation and direct interaction will facilitate obtaining their comments and their assistance in developing partnerships with the private sector as described in the upcoming Econom
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The examination of the Development Authority (DA) materials has confirmed that attending meetings (at their location??) is an important step which I need to take. The ensuing participation and direct interaction will facilitate obtaining their comments and their assistance in developing partnerships with the private sector as described in the upcoming Econom
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