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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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Would you help me make this shorter and correct?

KIA, an auto company, plans to expand its center and Bob suggested we should call KIA and find out who their suppliers are so that maybe we can calling on these suppliers and tell them about Powder Springs has to offers.
  

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Hi, KIA, an auto company, plans to expand its center and Bob suggested we should call KIA and find out who their suppliers are so that maybe we can calling on these suppliers and tell them about Powder Springs has to offers. You just need to break this up into shorter sentences. That will make your meaning clearer, more direct and more forceful.

  • Hi, KIA, an auto company, plans to expand its center and Bob suggested we should call KIA and find out who their suppliers are so that maybe we can calling on these suppliers and tell them about Powder Springs has to offers.
  • You just need to break this up into shorter sentences.
  • That will make your meaning clearer, more direct and more forceful.
  • ).
  • Bob suggested we should call to find out who their suppliers are.
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Hi,

KIA, an auto company, plans to expand its center and Bob suggested we should call KIA and find out who their suppliers are so that maybe we can calling on these suppliers and tell them about Powder Springs has to offers.

You just need to break this up into shorter sentences. That will make your meaning clearer, more direct and more forceful.
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Hi,

I was looking through this post and came upon this phrase, "calling on," and want to ask you whether we need to have the prepostion "on"? I have to say I sometimes (or close to "uaually") use it to describe an actual act of calling though.

I am sorry but can you resolve a punctuation problem or problems shown above in the underlined part.
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Hi,

I was looking through this post and came upon this phrase, "calling on," and want to ask you whether we need to have the prepostion "on"? I have to say I sometimes (or close to "usually") use it to describe an actual act of calling, though. I don't think yo

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