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WANG CHUN Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Would you help me check my sentences? Thank you

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00Hello, 02br
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00I am not sure whether the two sentences make sense in term of grammar and semantics. 02br
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001.It is difficult to express whether high-speed electronic communication media keep people from obtaining meaningful views because there are many angles to discuss it.02br
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002. It is some television programs that inhibit people from absorbing profound knowledge.02br
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003. National geographic channel introduce the details of Confucianism to audiences. 02br
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004. Some blogs on the Internet are a good means of fostering thoughtful discussion of a range of topics: politics, religion, economy, business, education, art, environment, and culture. 02br
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005. The serious problem of poverty gap is as result of a global free- market economy.02br
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0Actually I wouldn't use these sentences to express these meanings. It is difficult to express whether high-speed electronic communication media 01font 01b 00keeps02b 02font 00 people from obtaining meaningful views because there are many angles to discuss it. (I would use 01b 01font 00prevents02font 02b 00, though)02br 02br 002.

  • 0Actually I wouldn't use these sentences to express these meanings.
  • It is difficult to express whether high-speed electronic communication media 01font 01b 00keeps02b 02font 00 people from obtaining meaningful views because there are many angles to discuss it.
  • (I would use 01b 01font 00prevents02font 02b 00, though)02br 02br 002.
  • It is some television programs that 01b 01font 00inhibit02font 02b 00 people from absorbing profound knowledge.
  • (prevent again)02br 02br 003.
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0Actually I wouldn't use these sentences to express these meanings. But after a brief glance, I would change some of them into:02br
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001.It is difficult to express whether high-speed electronic communication media 01font01b00keeps02b02font00 people from obtaining meaningful views because there are many angles to

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