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Iris_es Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my sentences. Thank you.
My boss is very particular about email etiquette. Please advice me to improve on the following sentences if necessary.
"Thank you for sending the registration form.
I have forwarded your registration form to the department in charge to process the registration. We will issue the invoice to you by email as soon as possible.
Have a nice day."
Or is there a better way to respond?
"Thank you for sending the registration form.
I have forwarded your registration form to the department in charge to process the registration. We will issue the invoice to you by email as soon as possible.
Have a nice day."
Or is there a better way to respond?
Top answer
Looks good. " Chris
- Looks good.
- " Chris
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Looks good. But if one was to really nitpick,
"I have forwarded your form to the department-in-charge to process your registration."
Chris
"I have forwarded your form to the department-in-charge to process your registration."
Chris
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