would you correct my mistakes please.

Syrian civil war began in the early spring, the conflict gradually morphed from popular protests to an armed rebellion after months of military sieges.
In the beginning the capital Damascus was not affected that much but after almost 1 year suicide bombings took place everywhere and almost every day.
When armed clashes were getting closer to the place where we used to live , the air force intelligence closed all the exits in the area leaving only one to enter and exit from.
Two weeks later they requested from the residents to form popular committees to protect the area.
When they asked me to join them I rejected because I am that kind of people whom against holding weapons and because the air force intelligence forces popular committees to serve their own purposes.
In the beginning they were requesting kindly but later on and with the intensification of the war and the number of deaths they knocked our door telling us that this is the last warning to join them or we will get hurt and no one will protect us. 25/11/2012
After 3 days and while my mom was buying some stuffs the grocer she used to knew told her that some people planning to kidnap one of us.28/11/2012
The day after we started looking for another house to live in , so we moved my aunt's house .
A lot of calls I used to receive on my cell phone threating me and every time I change my number they were able to reach me.
Until the day we received a call on our homeland telephone: threatens to give our names to the military checkpoints so they arrest us.22/08/2013
We decided that we are no longer can live in Syria so we applied to the Egyptian visa but it was rejected, then we went to Turkey-Istanbul.03/09/2013
In Turkey we started looking for a house and we found one after 19 days because most of the houses owners refused to give their houses for Syrians.
After almost 9 months the house owner came and asked us to leave the house because some Syrians caused damages to his friend's house.
We packed up and we started looking for another house until we found someone to rent us his house daily until we find another house.
We moved to house owned by a Syrian after almost 10 days.
During our stay in Turkey we worked many jobs including a tourist's guide but I've been busted by the police and they gave me the first warning.
Then I worked as a civil engineer as well but I quit because the police once came and caught me working illegally without a work permission so they gave me the second warning and they told me that the last one will be kicking me to my country.
It's prevented to work for us over here but if we don’t work we can't live.