Would you Correct my letter expression about: " Contacting a professor about research task..."

Would you Correct my letter expression about: " Contacting a professor about research task..." ??

Dear Dr. xxxxxxxx ,

I came to address you professor, as i have been saw & read your publications about E-banking, Cash management in finance field, so i’m very interesting in that field of study, and concerned in different researches questions like that, as i am a PhD student in financial & economic studies at University of …….. .

Rather than i have occupied by preparing my PhD thesis on subject titled : « xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx », in that, i have been interesting on your publication entitled by : « xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx », published in 2007, in wich i have considerate like a previous study in my research.

In other way, i ask you ,if it is possible, to help us to construct a survey in the same methods by using your full survey content with your permission of course and respecting the scientific citation rules, in case of Algerian economic entreprises; that i’ll necessarily need in my study. In addition, the survey that you are constructed, has been validated by experts & he had passed the reliability test, that it mean i could treated as a validated measurement tool, on similar study.

Waiting your favorite ansewer,
Sincerely ..