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If I could travel back in time to meet a loved one, I would like to meet my grandfather who passed away several years ago. He fought World War 2 when he was young. The reason is that I have one thing that I want to ask him. I regret that I didn’t ask him about World War 2 during his lifetime because I’m interested in world history. Although I used to live with him and have lots of chances to ask, I had never asked. Also he gently used to tell me anything about old days. Therefore, I feel regret much more.

  

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Hi, If I could travel back in time to meet a loved one, I would like to meet my grandfather who passed away several years ago. He fought in World War 2 We commonly write it as II when he was young. The reason is that I have one thing that I want to ask him about.

  • Hi, If I could travel back in time to meet a loved one, I would like to meet my grandfather who passed away several years ago.
  • He fought in World War 2 We commonly write it as II when he was young.
  • The reason is that I have one thing that I want to ask him about.
  • I regret that I didn’t ask him about World War 2 during his lifetime because I’m interested in world history.
  • Although I used to live with him and have lots of chances to ask, I had never did asked .
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Hi,

If I could travel back in time to meet a loved one, I would like to meet my grandfather who passed away several years ago. He fought in World War 2 We commonly write it as II when he was young. The reason is that I have one thing that I want to ask him about. I regret that I didn’t ask him about World War 2 during his lifetime because I’m interested in world history. Although

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