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Nik Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Would you correct my esay?
The problem is that the man’s teacher from some country in Asia has the worst accent in the world. The woman suggests that the man talks to the teacher about it. Another option is that the man brings a tape recorder to class so that he can listen to it over again. I think that he should bring a tape recorder to class. The reason is that if the man doesn’t want her to get angry, he should ask the teacher if the man can bring one to class or not. However, if it is not allowed to bring one, he should talk to the teacher about his worst accent honestly.
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Hi Nik; The main problem in your essay is the use of pronouns. It is difficult for the reader to determine which person or thing that the pronoun refers to. The problem is that the man’s teacher from some country in Asia has the worst accent in the world.
- Hi Nik; The main problem in your essay is the use of pronouns.
- It is difficult for the reader to determine which person or thing that the pronoun refers to.
- The problem is that the man’s teacher from some country in Asia has the worst accent in the world.
- ) The woman suggests that the man talk to the teacher about it.
- (subjunctive mood after a polite suggestion) Another option is that the man bring a tape recorder to class so that he can listen to it (what does "it" refer to?
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Hi Nik;
The main problem in your essay is the use of pronouns. It is difficult for the reader to determine which person or thing that the pronoun refers to.
The problem is that the man’s teacher from some country in Asia has the worst accent in the world. (Does the teacher have a bad accent?)
The woman suggests that the man
The main problem in your essay is the use of pronouns. It is difficult for the reader to determine which person or thing that the pronoun refers to.
The problem is that the man’s teacher from some country in Asia has the worst accent in the world. (Does the teacher have a bad accent?)
The woman suggests that the man
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