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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? (Sep.24)

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: Shall we meet again for a meal [ dinner ] one of these ( fine ) days?

F: Great idea! How [ What ] about next Thursday?

M: Oh, I'm a bit tied up [ busy ] for the next couple of weeks.

I'll call you when I'm free.

No. 2

M: Didn't they say they needed this report by the 20th?

F: Right. We are very busy with [ over ] it this week if it's going to make it

on time.

M: That's the problem. We'll never be able to finish it by then.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

M: Shall we meet again for a dinner one of these fine days? F: Great idea! How about next Thursday?

  • M: Shall we meet again for a dinner one of these fine days?
  • F: Great idea!
  • How about next Thursday?
  • M: Oh, I'm a Little busy for the next couple of weeks.
  • I'll call you when I'm free.
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M: Shall we meet again for a dinner one of these fine days?

F: Great idea! How about next Thursday?

M: Oh, I'm a Little busy for the next couple of weeks.

I'll call you when I'm free.

No. 2

M: Didn't they say they needed this report by the 20th?

F: Right. We are very busy in this week if it's going to make it

on time.

M
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Excellent as usual. May I humbly suggest: Right! We're going to be really busy this week if we want to meet the deadline. **** We'll never be able to finish it EVEN by then.
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Thank you. Your comments are very helpful!

kenta

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