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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? (Sep.14)
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?
No. 1
M: These throat drops really cured [ got rid of / relieved ] my sore throat.
F: I was sure they would. I always have [ carry ] them with me.
M: You're very careful of your throat as may be expected of a singer.
No. 2
M: Sorry, sir. Your camera has to go through [ be checked ], too.
The data will be unaffected.
F: But this is an extremely expensive one, so handcheck, please.
M: All right. Then please put it on this tray.
Thank you! kenta
No. 1
M: These throat drops really cured [ got rid of / relieved ] my sore throat.
F: I was sure they would. I always have [ carry ] them with me.
M: You're very careful of your throat as may be expected of a singer.
No. 2
M: Sorry, sir. Your camera has to go through [ be checked ], too.
The data will be unaffected.
F: But this is an extremely expensive one, so handcheck, please.
M: All right. Then please put it on this tray.
Thank you! kenta
Top answer
Excellent! Just a few ideas: (a) Might the present perfect be more appropriate: These lozenges have really helped (b) careful "of" your throat. Perhaps some people would be more comfortable with careful "about" your throat (c) Don't worry.
- Excellent!
- Just a few ideas: (a) Might the present perfect be more appropriate: These lozenges have really helped (b) careful "of" your throat.
- Perhaps some people would be more comfortable with careful "about" your throat (c) Don't worry.
- The data....
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Excellent! Just a few ideas: (a) Might the present perfect be more appropriate: These lozenges have really helped (b) careful "of" your throat. Perhaps some people would be more comfortable with careful "about" your throat (c) Don't worry. The data....
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