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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English, please? ( Sept. 6 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: I bought a new car called [ named ] "Majesty". It deserves its reputation.

F: I hear it's really comfortable.

M: Yes. Besides it, it has good handling.

F: Would you take me for a ride [ give me a ride ] this weekend?

No. 2

M: My wife has a part time job, but the salary is low.

F: Really? How much is it per [ a ] day?

M: About forty dollars.

F: Well, I can introduce your wife to another better job.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

No. 1 M: I bought a new Toyota 'Majesty '. It deserves its reputation.

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  • 1 M: I bought a new Toyota 'Majesty '.
  • It deserves its reputation.
  • F: I hear it's really comfortable.
  • M: Yes , and it handles very well, too.
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No. 1

M: I bought a new Toyota 'Majesty'. It deserves its reputation.

F: I hear it's really comfortable.

M: Yes, and it handles very well, too.

F: Would you take me for a drive in it this weekend?

No. 2

M: My wife has a part time job, but the salary is low.

F: Really? How much does she get?

M: About
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any one who is willing to help me in my english speaking??
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Micawber. Your comment is always very nice.

Thank you very much. kenta

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