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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
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Would you correct my English, please? ( Sept. 23 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?
No. 1
M: I'm in love with [ I've fallen in love with ] you.
F: Oh, really? I didn't know that.
M: It's love at first sight [ I've taken a shine to you ].
May I ask you out this weekend?
No. 2
M: I love professional baseball.
F: What's your favorite team?
M: I am a Carp fan [ Carp's fan ].
F: Why don't we go to the baseball game anytime soon [ in the near future ] ?
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: I'm in love with [ I've fallen in love with ] you.
F: Oh, really? I didn't know that.
M: It's love at first sight [ I've taken a shine to you ].
May I ask you out this weekend?
No. 2
M: I love professional baseball.
F: What's your favorite team?
M: I am a Carp fan [ Carp's fan ].
F: Why don't we go to the baseball game anytime soon [ in the near future ] ?
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
No. 1 M: I'm in love with [ I've fallen in love with ] you. Either version is okay.
- No.
- 1 M: I'm in love with [ I've fallen in love with ] you.
- Either version is okay.
- F: Oh, really?
- I didn't know that.
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No. 1
M: I'm in love with [ I've fallen in love with ] you. Either version is okay.
F: Oh, really? I didn't know that.
M: It's love at first sight.
[ I've taken a shine to you ]. Inappropriate in this context.
May I ask you out this weekend?
M: I'm in love with [ I've fallen in love with ] you. Either version is okay.
F: Oh, really? I didn't know that.
M: It's love at first sight.
[ I've taken a shine to you ]. Inappropriate in this context.
May I ask you out this weekend?
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