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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English, please? ( Sept. 20 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: May I take your order, please?

F: I'm expecting someone, thank you.

M: Certainly. When you're ready to order, please push this call button.

No. 2

M: I'm thinking of [ about ] asking Mary out.

F: Really? I know she likes you a lot. She'll surely say yes.

M: I hope so. Can you recommend a good restaurant for her?

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

Your dialogues are good, Kenta. I do have an objection, however, to the last sentence in dialogue 2. It's not necessary to write "for her".

— JohnParis

  • Your dialogues are good, Kenta.
  • I do have an objection, however, to the last sentence in dialogue 2.
  • It's not necessary to write "for her".
  • Since you are both going to eat, I presume you both want to go to a good restaurant.
  • Not just a good restaurant for Mary?
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Your dialogues are good, Kenta.

I do have an objection, however, to the last sentence in dialogue 2.

It's not necessary to write "for her". Since you are both going to eat, I presume you both want to go to a good restaurant. Not just a good restaurant for Mary?

Right?

Cheers,

John
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Hi,John. Nice to meet you! You have a good point.

I hope you'll help me from now on.

Thank you very much. kenta
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