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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
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Would you correct my English, please? ( Oct. 13 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?
No. 1
M: Let's go out now. Do you have everything?
F: Sure. Oh, wait, I forgot my wallet.
M: Not again. I'll wait here until you're back.
No. 2
M: Are you cooking spaghetti? What's that?
F: Squid. I didn't like its texture at first, but now I've got
used to it since I came to Japan.
M: Good. With squid it'll enhance its flavor.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Let's go out now. Do you have everything?
F: Sure. Oh, wait, I forgot my wallet.
M: Not again. I'll wait here until you're back.
No. 2
M: Are you cooking spaghetti? What's that?
F: Squid. I didn't like its texture at first, but now I've got
used to it since I came to Japan.
M: Good. With squid it'll enhance its flavor.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hi, I may post the second dialogue later. For now, here's the first one. M: Let's go out now.
- Hi, I may post the second dialogue later.
- For now, here's the first one.
- M: Let's go out now.
- Do you have everything you need with you?
- F: Yes, sure.
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Hi,
I may post the second dialogue later. For now, here's the first one.
M: Let's go out now. Do you have everything you need with you?
F: Yes, sure. Oh, hold on a minute. I've left my wallet in the room.
M: Oh, not again. O.K, I'm waiting here until you have it.
Regards
I've rewritten the second dialogue to make it more colloquial.
M:
I may post the second dialogue later. For now, here's the first one.
M: Let's go out now. Do you have everything you need with you?
F: Yes, sure. Oh, hold on a minute. I've left my wallet in the room.
M: Oh, not again. O.K, I'm waiting here until you have it.
Regards
I've rewritten the second dialogue to make it more colloquial.
M:
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