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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English, please? ( May 16 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: Do you mind if I open the window?

F: No. But you wear just a tee. Don't you feel cold?

M: Never. I feel a little too warm.

F: Go ahead, then. I don't mind.

No. 2

M: Are you going to have fried chicken again? You had one yesterday, too.
( Q I think "had it" is wrong. Right? )

F: Yeah, why shouldn'I eat fried chicken?

( Q Do I need "a" before fried chicken? )

M: Don't you know? It has too much fat.
( Q Can I say "One has ..."? )

F: I don't care about that.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

Hi, No. 1 M: Do you mind if I open the window? F: No.

  • Hi, No.
  • 1 M: Do you mind if I open the window?
  • F: No.
  • But you wear just a tee .
  • Don't you feel cold?
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Hi,

No. 1

M: Do you mind if I open the window?

F: No. But you wear just a tee. Don't you feel cold?

But you're just wearing a tee-shirt.

M: Never. I feel a little too warm.

F: Go ahead, then. I don't mind.

No. 2
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Hi, Clive. You answered all my questions.

Thank you very much. kenta

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