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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English, please? ( July 12 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: Are you leaving [ going out ] now?

F: Yes. If you're going out, too, be sure to [ make sure you ]

lock the doors.

M: OK. There have been some problems around here recently.

No. 2

M: You can use a major credit card to pay for the car.

F: Oh, sorry. I don't have any card. Can I pay in cash?

M: Of course. If you show me your driver's license,

you can rent a car.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

No. 1 M: Are you leaving / going out now? F: Yes.

  • No.
  • 1 M: Are you leaving / going out now?
  • F: Yes.
  • If you're going out too , be sure to / make sure you lock the door.
  • There've been some break-ins around here recently.
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No. 1

M: Are you leaving / going out now?

F: Yes. If you're going out too, be sure to / make sure you lock the door. There've been some break-ins around here recently.

M: OK.

No. 2

M: You can use any major credit card to pay for the car rental.

F: Oh, sorry. I don't have one. Can I pay in cash?
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Hi
I'm afraid the sequence of questions and answers is not in consistent with the speaker and the listener.

Please tell me whether this is fine.

M: Are you leaving [ going out ] now?
F: Yes.

M: If you're going out, too, be sure to [ make sure you ]
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"Please ensure you lock the doors"-- very formal in AmE.
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Thank you, Mister Micawber.
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Thank you both. I learned a lot from your comments.

kenta

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