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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English, please? ( July 11 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?
No. 1
M: Are you going to show your dance in the school festival?
F: Yes. I've been practicing dancing for this grand occasion.
M: Good. Take it easy.
No. 2
M: Do you know ( that ) ten million dollars worth apples here
are exported to Europe?
F: Yes. Besides, we export them to Asia.
M: The government should protect our agriculture industry.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Are you going to show your dance in the school festival?
F: Yes. I've been practicing dancing for this grand occasion.
M: Good. Take it easy.
No. 2
M: Do you know ( that ) ten million dollars worth apples here
are exported to Europe?
F: Yes. Besides, we export them to Asia.
M: The government should protect our agriculture industry.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hi, No. 1 No errors, but here is a more natural and casual version. M: Are you going to show your dance in the school festival?
- Hi, No.
- 1 No errors, but here is a more natural and casual version.
- M: Are you going to show your dance in the school festival?
- F: Yes.
- I've been practicing dancing for this grand occasion.
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Hi,
No. 1 No errors, but here is a more natural and casual version.
M: Are you going to show your dance in the school festival?
F: Yes. I've been practicing dancing for this grand occasion.
M: Good. Take it easy.
M: Are you going to dance in the school s
No. 1 No errors, but here is a more natural and casual version.
M: Are you going to show your dance in the school festival?
F: Yes. I've been practicing dancing for this grand occasion.
M: Good. Take it easy.
M: Are you going to dance in the school s
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