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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
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Would you correct my English, please? ( Jan. 5 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?
No. 1
M: What kind of job are you looking for?
F: Well, I have worked in the fashion world for over ten years.
M: You're in luck. We need salespersons for our new boutique.
F: Then I'd like you to hire me.
No. 2
F: What kind of birthday cake should I make for Mary?
M: She's only turning four, then a simple strawberry cake
will do [ be enough].
F: OK. And I'll put one candle for each year of her age on it.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: What kind of job are you looking for?
F: Well, I have worked in the fashion world for over ten years.
M: You're in luck. We need salespersons for our new boutique.
F: Then I'd like you to hire me.
No. 2
F: What kind of birthday cake should I make for Mary?
M: She's only turning four, then a simple strawberry cake
will do [ be enough].
F: OK. And I'll put one candle for each year of her age on it.
Thank you. kenta
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Hi Kenta, No. 1 M: What kind of job are you looking for? F: Well, I've worked in the fashion world for over ten years.
- Hi Kenta, No.
- 1 M: What kind of job are you looking for?
- F: Well, I've worked in the fashion world for over ten years.
- M: You're in luck.
- We need salespersons for our new boutique.
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Hi Kenta,
No. 1
M: What kind of job are you looking for?
F: Well, I've worked in the fashion world for over ten years.
M: You're in luck. We need salespersons for our new boutique.
F: I'd like that very much.
No. 2
F: What kind of birthday cake
No. 1
M: What kind of job are you looking for?
F: Well, I've worked in the fashion world for over ten years.
M: You're in luck. We need salespersons for our new boutique.
F: I'd like that very much.
No. 2
F: What kind of birthday cake
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Hi, Clive. Your comment is very good and instructive.
Thank you. kenta
Thank you. kenta
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