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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
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Would you correct my English, please? ( Jan. 3 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: We need to buy a new computer that can handle more efficient

software.

F: We bought it just two years ago at a considerable cost.

( Q Can I also say " at a considerable cost just two years ago"? )

M: I know, but the cyberworld is fast-evolving.

No. 2

M: Have you finished printing out the spreadsheets?

F: Well, they are almost finished, but the printer is running out

of paper.

M: Take your time. I need them at the press conference tomorrow.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

No. 1 M: We need to buy a new computer that can handle more sophisticated software. F: We bought this one just two years ago at a considerable cost.

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  • 1 M: We need to buy a new computer that can handle more sophisticated software.
  • F: We bought this one just two years ago at a considerable cost.
  • -- Yes ) M: I know, but the cyberworld is fast evolving .
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No. 1

M: We need to buy a new computer that can handle more sophisticated software.
F: We bought this one just two years ago at a considerable cost. ( Q Can I also say " at a considerable cost just two years ago"?-- Yes )
M: I know, but the cyberworld is fast evolving.

No. 2

M: Have you finished printing out the spreadsheets?
F
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Hi, Mister Micawber. I'll post my dialogues this year, too.

I hope you'll teach me English. kenta
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Happy New Year to you, too, Kenta.

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