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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English, please? ( Jan. 22 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: How may I help you?

F: I'm looking for a hat that protects me from the sunshine.

M: OK. Here it is.

F: Thank you. It's fine. I'll take it.

No. 2

M: Have you visited [ been to ] the shop I told you about?

F: Yes! They have [ had ] a good selection of goods.

M: Did you talk to the shop owner?

F: Yes. I asked him a lot of questions and he kindly answered them.

Thank you. kenta
  

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Kenta Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

— Bennyman

  • Kenta Hello.
  • I wrote two dialogues.
  • Would you check them, please?
  • No.
  • 1 M: How may I help you?
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KentaHello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: How may I help you?

F: I'm looking for a hat that protects me from the sun. (not sunshine)

M: OK. Here it is.

F: Thank you. It's fine. I'll take it.

No. 2

M: Have you
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Hi, Bennyman. Nice to see you.

I post my dialogues every other day.

I hope you'll give me good comments to me.

Thank you. kenta
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If I may make some more suggestions (this is mostly personal taste and not necessarily better):


F: I'm looking for a hat that can protect me against the sun.

M: OK. What about this one?

F: That looks like a nice hat. I'll take it - How much does it cost?
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Hi, Bennyman. Thank you again.

I teach English in Japan. You helped me a lot.

Thank you. kenta
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Bennyman: I'm looking for a hat that can protect me against the sun
I think it should be 'from', not 'against'.
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