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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English, please? ( Jan. 15 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: I really had a good time with you. But it's getting dark, so we'd

better leave [ go ] now.

F: Oh, really? ( It ) Looks like rain. I'll drive you home, if you like.

M: Thank you. I owe you one.

No. 2

M: I called you more than twenty times.

F: Oh, sorry. I was on [ in ] the subway.

M: I see. I feel very cold because I've been waiting here long.

F: I'm terribly sorry. I'll buy you something hot to drink.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

No. 1 M: I really had a good time with you. But it's getting dark, so we'd better leave/go now.

  • No.
  • 1 M: I really had a good time with you.
  • But it's getting dark, so we'd better leave/go now.
  • F: Oh, really?
  • ( It ) Looks like rain.
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No. 1

M: I really had a good time with you. But it's getting dark, so we'd better leave/go now.
F: Oh, really? ( It ) Looks like rain. I'll drive you home, if you like.
M: Thank you. That's great.

No. 2

M: I called you more than twenty times.
F: Oh, sorry. I was on/in the subway.
M: I see. I feel very cold because I've been waiting here so
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Hi, Mr Micawber. You always teach me natural English.

Thank you. kenta

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