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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
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Would you correct my English, please? ( Feb. 20 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?
No. 1
M: Did you buy your mom a gold necklace you'd mentioned before?
F: She has [ had ] long wanted it, but it had sold out.
M: So what are you going to buy, instead?
F: I'm wondering what is good for her.
No. 2
M: Aren't those usually about 8 dollars each?
F: Right, but they were 20 dollars off if I buy them by the dozen.
So I got a dozen.
M: But ... it will cost us at least a year to use them up.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Did you buy your mom a gold necklace you'd mentioned before?
F: She has [ had ] long wanted it, but it had sold out.
M: So what are you going to buy, instead?
F: I'm wondering what is good for her.
No. 2
M: Aren't those usually about 8 dollars each?
F: Right, but they were 20 dollars off if I buy them by the dozen.
So I got a dozen.
M: But ... it will cost us at least a year to use them up.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
No. 1 M: Did you buy your mom a gold necklace you'd mentioned before? Did you buy your mom the gold necklace you'd mentioned before F: She has [ had ] long wanted it, but it had sold out.
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- 1 M: Did you buy your mom a gold necklace you'd mentioned before?
- Did you buy your mom the gold necklace you'd mentioned before F: She has [ had ] long wanted it, but it had sold out.
- She had long wanted it, but it had sold out M: So what are you going to buy, instead?
- F: I'm wondering what is good for her.
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No. 1
M: Did you buy your mom a gold necklace you'd mentioned before?
Did you buy your mom the gold necklace you'd mentioned before
F: She has [ had ] long wanted it, but it had sold out.
She had long wanted it, but it had sold out
M: So what are you going to buy, instead?
F: I'm wondering what is good for her.
No. 2
M: Ar
M: Did you buy your mom a gold necklace you'd mentioned before?
Did you buy your mom the gold necklace you'd mentioned before
F: She has [ had ] long wanted it, but it had sold out.
She had long wanted it, but it had sold out
M: So what are you going to buy, instead?
F: I'm wondering what is good for her.
No. 2
M: Ar
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