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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
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Would you correct my English, please? ( Feb. 16 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: Your 4WD is cool, isn't it?

F: It is very old, though. I'm really into a classic car.

M: I think it's good. What about it do you like?

F: It's trouble proof. I prefer a Japanese-made car, then.

No. 2

M: I heard your brother is really cool.

F: I have two brothers. Which one?

M: Oh, I don't know. I'd like to see both of them anyway.

F: OK. We have a barbecue party this weekend. Won't you come [ join us ]?

Thank you. kenta
  

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No. 1 M: Your four-wheel drive is cool! F: It's very old, though.

  • No.
  • 1 M: Your four-wheel drive is cool!
  • F: It's very old, though.
  • I'm really into classic cars.
  • M: I think that's great .
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No. 1

M: Your four-wheel drive is cool!

F: It's very old, though. I'm really into classic cars.
M: I think that's great. What do you like about it?
F: It's trouble-free. That's why I prefer Japanese cars.

No. 2

M: I heard your brother is really cool.
F: I have two brothers. Which one?
M: Oh
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Hi, Mr Micawber. Your dialogue is very natural.

Thank you. kenta

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