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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English, please? ( Feb. 1 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?
No. 1
M: Here's your coke. By the way, what are you going to buy?
F: I've come here to find some nice shoes for Eri.
M: That reminds me. I need a pair of new basket shoes. Mine are
worn out at the heels.
No. 2
M: Sorry I'm late.
F: There you are! We're [ We've been ] looking all over for you. You overslept?
M: No. Just when I was leaving home, Jane called me and she asked me
to lend her some of my novels.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Here's your coke. By the way, what are you going to buy?
F: I've come here to find some nice shoes for Eri.
M: That reminds me. I need a pair of new basket shoes. Mine are
worn out at the heels.
No. 2
M: Sorry I'm late.
F: There you are! We're [ We've been ] looking all over for you. You overslept?
M: No. Just when I was leaving home, Jane called me and she asked me
to lend her some of my novels.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
M: Here's your coke. By the way, what are you going to buy? F: I've come here to find some nice shoes for Eri.
- M: Here's your coke.
- By the way, what are you going to buy?
- F: I've come here to find some nice shoes for Eri.
- M: That reminds me – I need a pair of new basket shoes.
- Mine are worn out at the heels.
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M: Here's your coke. By the way, what are you going to buy?
F: I've come here to find some nice shoes for Eri.
M: That reminds me – I need a pair of new basket shoes. Mine are worn out at the heels.
No. 2
M: Sorry I'm late.
F: There you are! We've been looking all over for you. You overslept?
M: No. Just when I was leaving home, Jane called and a
F: I've come here to find some nice shoes for Eri.
M: That reminds me – I need a pair of new basket shoes. Mine are worn out at the heels.
No. 2
M: Sorry I'm late.
F: There you are! We've been looking all over for you. You overslept?
M: No. Just when I was leaving home, Jane called and a
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Hi Kenta,
In addition: Capitalize Coke, and what are "basket shoes"? I'm not sure that that one is correct.
In addition: Capitalize Coke, and what are "basket shoes"? I'm not sure that that one is correct.
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Hi, Geek. I should have written "basketball shoes".
Is that right?
kenta
Is that right?
kenta
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You could, but [url=http://www.pickyourshoes.com/casual/puma_basket_wht_blk.htm]BASKET SHOES[/url] also exist - that's what I thought you meant, Kenta.
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