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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English, please? ( Dec. 5 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you correct them?
No. 1
M: Do you have any plans for this winter?
F: Yes, I'm planning to go to Hokkaido. Have you been there?
M: Yes, I bet you'll enjoy skiing in big mountains.
F: I heard snow in Hokkaido is by far the best in Japan.
No. 2
M: Mr. Harrison is too strict. Don't you think so?
F: Yeah. He's always angry about something.
M: I wish he gave us less homework.
F: I know how you feel ... but no chance, I think.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Do you have any plans for this winter?
F: Yes, I'm planning to go to Hokkaido. Have you been there?
M: Yes, I bet you'll enjoy skiing in big mountains.
F: I heard snow in Hokkaido is by far the best in Japan.
No. 2
M: Mr. Harrison is too strict. Don't you think so?
F: Yeah. He's always angry about something.
M: I wish he gave us less homework.
F: I know how you feel ... but no chance, I think.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hi, No. 1 M: Do you have any plans for this winter? F: Yes, I'm planning to go to Hokkaido.
- Hi, No.
- 1 M: Do you have any plans for this winter?
- F: Yes, I'm planning to go to Hokkaido.
- Have you been there?
- M: Yes, I bet you'll enjoy skiing the in big mountains.
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Hi,
No. 1
M: Do you have any plans for this winter?
F: Yes, I'm planning to go to Hokkaido. Have you been there?
M: Yes, I bet you'll enjoy skiing the in big mountains.
F: I heard the
No. 1
M: Do you have any plans for this winter?
F: Yes, I'm planning to go to Hokkaido. Have you been there?
M: Yes, I bet you'll enjoy skiing the
F: I heard the
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Regarding your second conversation ...
M: "Mr. Harrison is too strict." I would not add anything myself as the comment alone is looking for agreement, with body language, and facial expression. If you really want to emphasize it, "isn't he?" sounds more natural to me.
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F: "I know how you feel ... but no chance I think." The "I think" is implied, and sou
M: "Mr. Harrison is too strict." I would not add anything myself as the comment alone is looking for agreement, with body language, and facial expression. If you really want to emphasize it, "isn't he?" sounds more natural to me.
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F: "I know how you feel ... but no chance I think." The "I think" is implied, and sou
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