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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
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Would you correct my English, please? ( Dec. 16 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them?

No. 1 At a drugstore

M: What do you suggest [ recommend ] for a cold?

F: If you have a cough and a fever, these work very well.

Take two tablets after meals.

M: Thanks. I'll take them and some tissues, too.

No. 2

M: I heard our company is on the fast track.

F: Right. We are hiring 200 more people at the third quarter.

M: Yeah, and a new plant is going to be built in China next year.

Thank you! kenta
  

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No. 1 At a drugstore M: What do you suggest/recommend for a cold? F: If you have a cough and a fever, these work very well.

  • No.
  • 1 At a drugstore M: What do you suggest/recommend for a cold?
  • F: If you have a cough and a fever, these work very well.
  • Take two tablets after meals.
  • M: Thanks.
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No. 1 At a drugstore

M: What do you suggest/recommend for a cold?
F: If you have a cough and a fever, these work very well. Take two tablets after meals.
M: Thanks. I'll take them and some tissues, too.

No. 2

M: I heard our company is growing fast. ('Fast track' is not clear here. It requires some sort of clear goal in the context.)
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Hi, Mister Micawber. Your comment is very good.

Thank you very much. kenta

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