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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
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Would you correct my English, please? ( Aug 19 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: Thank heavens we're getting some rain. Our rice paddies need water.

F: Yeah, but how should we get home? I've forgot to bring our umbrellas.

M: Let's wait and see. If necessary, we can easily find a hotel, maybe.

No. 2

M: I'd like to book a flight to Tokyo on September 10th.

F: I'm sorry, sir, but all flights are [ have been ] booked.

M: Okay, how about the flight on the 12th?

F: Sure. You can get it.

Thank you. kenta
  

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Hi, No. 1 M: Thank heavens we're getting some rain. Our rice paddies need water.

  • Hi, No.
  • 1 M: Thank heavens we're getting some rain.
  • Our rice paddies need water.
  • F: Yeah, but how should we get home?
  • I've forgot to bring our umbrellas.
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Hi,

No. 1

M: Thank heavens we're getting some rain. Our rice paddies need water.

F: Yeah, but how should we get home? I've forgot to bring our umbrellas.

But how're we going to get home? I forgot to bring our umbrellas.

M: Let's wait and see. If necessary, we can easily find a hotel
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Clive. You showed me natural English sentences.

Thanks a lot! kenta

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