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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English, please? ( Aug. 17 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?
No. 1
M: I've ordered several books through the Internet.
F: Really? I've never ordered anything through the Internet.
Is it easy?
M: Yes, quite easy. I'll show you how to do it.
No. 2
M: I didn't know you had so many [ much ] clothes.
F: Actually, I don't have expensive ones. I usually buy clothes
at UNIQLO.
M: Really? I believe you have a wonderful fashion sense.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: I've ordered several books through the Internet.
F: Really? I've never ordered anything through the Internet.
Is it easy?
M: Yes, quite easy. I'll show you how to do it.
No. 2
M: I didn't know you had so many [ much ] clothes.
F: Actually, I don't have expensive ones. I usually buy clothes
at UNIQLO.
M: Really? I believe you have a wonderful fashion sense.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hi Kenta, Good. So many clothes. Clive
- Hi Kenta, Good.
- So many clothes.
- Clive
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I've never ordered anything "through the Internet". I would say "from the Internet" or "off the Internet" but that might be a BE thing.
As Clive said, it's definitely "many clothes".
"I believe you have a wonderful fashion sense" also doesn't sound very natural, although it is gramatically correct. I'd say something like "You have such a wonderful fashion sen
As Clive said, it's definitely "many clothes".
"I believe you have a wonderful fashion sense" also doesn't sound very natural, although it is gramatically correct. I'd say something like "You have such a wonderful fashion sen
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Hi, Clive. You always help me a lot.
And hi, Triident. You gave me a comment for the first time, didn't you?
Thank you both! kenta
And hi, Triident. You gave me a comment for the first time, didn't you?
Thank you both! kenta
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