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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
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Would you correct my English, please? ( Apr. 5 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: Is this the shop ( that ) we saw on TV last night?

F: No. We're going [ on the way ] to another shop.

M: Why? I want to go there.

F: Sorry. It's closed today.

No. 2

M: You've been coming home late these days.

F: Oh, dad, it's spring vacation! I want to hang around with my

friends. I've already finished my homework.

M: No way. You have to come home earlier.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

Hi, No. 1 M: Is this the shop ( that ) we saw on TV last night? (In N.

  • Hi, No.
  • 1 M: Is this the shop ( that ) we saw on TV last night?
  • (In N.
  • America, say 'store') F: No.
  • We're going [ on the way ] to another one shop .
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Hi,

No. 1

M: Is this the shop ( that ) we saw on TV last night? (In N. America, say 'store')

F: No. We're going [ on the way ] to another one shop.

M: Why? I want to go there.

F: Sorry. It's closed today.
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Hi, Clive. You always help me a lot.

I always thank you for your comment.

kenta

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