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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Would you correct my English? ( Oct. 4 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: You advertise CD players at a 30% discount, but the shop

across the street sells ( ones ) for 35% off. Here's a flier.

F: Oh, really? Then we'll sell them at a 40% discount.

M: Thank you. I'll take it.

No. 2

M: This is for you. I'm sure you'll like it.

F: Oh, how lovely ( it is ) ! This is just what I ( 've ) wanted.

How thoughtful of you!

M: You're welcome [ Forget it ]. I'm glad you like [ liked ] it.
( Q Any difference between like and liked? )

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

No. 1 M: You advertise CD players at a 30% discount, but the shop across the street sells them for 35% off. Here's their flier.

  • No.
  • 1 M: You advertise CD players at a 30% discount, but the shop across the street sells them for 35% off.
  • Here's their flier.
  • F: Oh, really?
  • Then we'll sell you one at a 40% discount.
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No. 1

M: You advertise CD players at a 30% discount, but the shop across the street sells them for 35% off. Here's their flier.
F: Oh, really? Then we'll sell you one at a 40% discount.
M: Great! I'll take it.

No. 2

M: This is for you. I hope you like it.
F: Oh, how lovely! This is just what I wanted. How th

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