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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? ( Oct. 23 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
F: This skirt is a little ( too ) tight in the waist. I wonder if I've gain [ put on ] weight.
M: You don't look like it.
F: Should I go on a diet?
M: I don't think so. And too severe [ hard ] a diet is bad for you [ ( your ) health ].
No. 2
M: Hello. This is Ken. May I speak [ talk ] to Mari?
F: Hi, Ken. Mari is out [ not in ] right now. Can I take a message?
M: There's no hurry [ It's not urgent ], so I'll talk to her tomorrow.
F: Is that OK? Shall I have her call you back?
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
F: This skirt is a little ( too ) tight in the waist. I wonder if I've gain [ put on ] weight.
M: You don't look like it.
F: Should I go on a diet?
M: I don't think so. And too severe [ hard ] a diet is bad for you [ ( your ) health ].
No. 2
M: Hello. This is Ken. May I speak [ talk ] to Mari?
F: Hi, Ken. Mari is out [ not in ] right now. Can I take a message?
M: There's no hurry [ It's not urgent ], so I'll talk to her tomorrow.
F: Is that OK? Shall I have her call you back?
Thank you. kenta
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No. 1 F: This skirt's a little (too) tight in the waist. I wonder if I've gained / put on weight ?
- No.
- 1 F: This skirt's a little (too) tight in the waist.
- I wonder if I've gained / put on weight ?
- M: You don't look like it.
- F: Should I go on a diet?
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No. 1
F: This skirt's a little (too) tight in the waist. I wonder if I've gained / put on weight?
M: You don't look like it.
F: Should I go on a diet?
M: I don't think so. [The last sentence was a non sequitur, Kenta. Try something else.]
No. 2
M: Hello. This is Ken. Can/Could I speak / talk to Mari?
F: Hi,
F: This skirt's a little (too) tight in the waist. I wonder if I've gained / put on weight?
M: You don't look like it.
F: Should I go on a diet?
M: I don't think so. [The last sentence was a non sequitur, Kenta. Try something else.]
No. 2
M: Hello. This is Ken. Can/Could I speak / talk to Mari?
F: Hi,
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Hi, Mr Micawber. Your comments are always instructive.
Thank you. kenta
Thank you. kenta
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