Would you correct my English? ( Oct. 18 )

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Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: How about going to see that horror movie.

F: Never [ No way ]!

M: Why not? You always talk about the movies you watched [ saw ].

F: Yes, but horror ones [ films ] are an exception.

No. 2

M: Look! It's a perfect day for a date.

F: Yes, but the weather forecast says it'll rain this evening.

M: Don't worry [ No problem ]. We'll be back by then.

F: OK. I'll take my umbrella just in case.

Thank you. kenta

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

No. 1

M: How about going to see that horror movie?
F: Never! / No way!
M: Why not? ~~You always talk about the movies you watched [ saw ]~~. (Sorry, this kind of response makes no sense to me, Kenta; it is a non sequitur. And I don't know what to suggest instead; I don't know what you are thinking of.)

F: Yes, but horror ones/films are an exception.

No. 2

M: Look! It's a perfect day for a walk in the park / trip to the zoo. (I don't know what you have in mind, but 'date' is too general to be qualified by the weather.)

F: Yes, but the weather forecast says it'll rain this evening.
M: Don't worry / No problem. We'll be back by then.
F: OK. But I'll take my umbrella just in case.

Englishmaven · Answer

I understood your sentence to mean that the person is always talking about the movies he sees, so you thought he would like to see another movie. It doesn't relate to the horror movie, but it isn't totally unrelated.Maybe you meant

You are always talking about the horror movies you've seen.

Kenta · Answer

Hello, Mr Micawber. You always help me study English.

Thank you very much. kenta

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