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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
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Would you correct my English? ( Oct. 11 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1 Proposal

M: You're the one for me in this [ the ] world. Will you marry me?

F: Oh, I'm very glad to hear that. Of course, yes.

M: Thank you. I fell in love ( with you ) at first sight.

F: Me, too. It must be [ have been ] destiny.

( Q. Which is better "be" or "have been"? )

No. 2

M: What would you like to drink?

F: Whiskey and water, please.

M: Certainly. Now a highball is very popular. Won't you try one?

F: Good. I'll have it afterwards.

Thank you. kenta
  

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Kenta M: You're the one for me in the whole world. Will you marry me? F: Oh, I'm very glad to hear that.

  • Kenta M: You're the one for me in the whole world.
  • Will you marry me?
  • F: Oh, I'm very glad to hear that.
  • Of course, yes.
  • M: Thank you.
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KentaM: You're the one for me in the whole world. Will you marry me?
F: Oh, I'm very glad to hear that. Of course, yes.
M: Thank you. I fell in love ( with you ) at first sight.
F: Me, too. It must be destiny. "Be" is better since it is still a destiny indeed.
( Q. Which is better "be" or "have been"? )
No. 2
M:
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Hi, Fandorin. Nice to meet you!

Your comments are very helpful.

Thank you and see you again!

kenta

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