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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? ( Oct. 1 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: I hear [ heard ] you have expanded your research staff.

F: Well, we need more staff to develop ( our ) new products.

M: There're a lot [ much ] more companies overseas and they're

trying to develop ones.

No. 2

M: It's much cooler today than yesterday.

F: Finally, the lingering summer heat has finished.

M: Right. It's cool today, isn't it?

F: Yes, it certainly [ surely ] is.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

Hi, No. 1 M: I hear [ heard ] you have expanded your research staff. F: Well, we need more staff to develop ( our ) new products.

  • Hi, No.
  • 1 M: I hear [ heard ] you have expanded your research staff.
  • F: Well, we need more staff to develop ( our ) new products.
  • M: There're a lot [ much ] more companies overseas and they're trying to develop ones.
  • trying to do the same thing.
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Hi,

No. 1

M: I hear [ heard ] you have expanded your research staff.

F: Well, we need more staff to develop ( our ) new products.

M: There're a lot [ much ] more companies overseas and they're



trying to develop ones. trying to do the same thing.

(I'm not sure why you said 'more')
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Hi,Clive. Thank you for correcting my English.

See you soon! kenta

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