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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
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Would you correct my English? ( Nov. 9 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: I don't like this red shirt. It's too loud for me.

F: Oh. How about this one then?

M: Well, I'll take this. I don't really look good in red.

F: This shirt really suits you well, I think.

No. 2

M: I saw Jane walking with her boyfriend.

F: Really? I didn't know she is seeing someone. What does he look like?

M: He is tall and cool.

F: I envy her. But I'm glad she has a steady.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

No. 1 M: I don't like this red shirt. It's too loud for me.

  • No.
  • 1 M: I don't like this red shirt.
  • It's too loud for me.
  • F: Oh.
  • How about this one, then?
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No. 1

M: I don't like this red shirt. It's too loud for me.
F: Oh. How about this one, then?
M: Ah. OK, I'll take this. I don't really look good in red.
F: This shirt really suits you well, I think.

No. 2

M: I saw Jane walking with her boyfriend.
F: Really? I didn't know she was seeing someone. What does he look like?
M: He's ta
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Hi, Mr Micawber. You always tell me more natural English.

Thank you. kenta

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