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Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Would you correct my English? ( Nov. 7 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: How much are the tickets?

F: They're ten dollars for adults and half-price for children.

M: OK. I'd like five tickets --- two adults and three children.

F: It'll be thirty five dollars.

No. 2

M: When are we leaving?

F: The bus leaves at seven thirty, so I'd like everyone to be

back on the bus five minutes before departure.

M: Sure. I'll buy some souvenirs by then.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

Hi, M: How much are the tickets? F: They're ten dollars for adults and half-price for children. M: OK.

  • Hi, M: How much are the tickets?
  • F: They're ten dollars for adults and half-price for children.
  • M: OK.
  • I'd like five tickets please --- two adults and three children.
  • F: It'll be That'll be / That's thirty five dollars please.
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Hi,



M: How much are the tickets?

F: They're ten dollars for adults and half-price for children.

M: OK. I'd like five tickets please --- two adults and three children.

F: It'll be That'll be / That's thirty five dollars please.



You'd be surprised by how often we say 'please'.

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Hi, Clive. You helped me a lot. I learned much from your comment.

Thank you. kenta

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