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Kenta Posted 15 years ago
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Would you correct my English? ( Nov 26 )

Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: How did your birthday go? [ How was your birthday? ]

F: It was nice at first, but it ended up being terrible.

M: What happened?

F: Some boys drank too much and ... guess what?

No. 2

M: How was your trip to Canada?

F: Great. I wish I could have stayed there longer.

M: I know how you feel. An oversees trip is a lot of [ very ] fun.

Thank you. kenta
  

Top answer

1. M: How was your birthday? F.

  • 1.
  • M: How was your birthday?
  • F.
  • It was nice at first, but ended up being terrible.
  • M: What happened?
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M: How was your birthday?

F. It was nice at first, but ended up being terrible.

M: What happened?

F: Some boys drank too much... and guess what?

(What are you trying to say here?)

2.

M: How was your Canada trip?

(no problem with making Canada an adjective)

F: Great, I wish I could've stayed there longer.

M
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Hi, Akshay Bilolikar. You helped me a lot.

Thank you very much. kenta

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