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Kenta Posted 17 years ago
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Would you correct my English? ( Nov. 24 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: I visited my parents' place [ my family home ] in Osaka.
F: Oh, are you from Osaka? I didn't know that [ it ].
M: Didn't I say it [ so ]? I thought you knew it.
F: No. How many people ( are there ) in your family?
No. 2 On the freeway
M: Okay, we're getting close. Do you know where the exit is?
F: Yes. You'd better get in the right lane. We'll get there in a
few minutes.
M: Now I see "Pacific Avenue." That's the one, isn't it?
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: I visited my parents' place [ my family home ] in Osaka.
F: Oh, are you from Osaka? I didn't know that [ it ].
M: Didn't I say it [ so ]? I thought you knew it.
F: No. How many people ( are there ) in your family?
No. 2 On the freeway
M: Okay, we're getting close. Do you know where the exit is?
F: Yes. You'd better get in the right lane. We'll get there in a
few minutes.
M: Now I see "Pacific Avenue." That's the one, isn't it?
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
- Hello.
- I wrote two dialogues.
- Will you correct them?
- No.
- 1 M: I visited my parents' place [ my family home ] in Osaka.
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Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: I visited my parents' place [ my family home ] in Osaka.
I visited my parent's home (the home belonging to your parents -unless you have more than one set of parents!!) or I visited my family home in Osaka
F: Oh, are you from Osaka? I didn't know that [ it ].
Oh, I didn't know you were fro
No. 1
M: I visited my parents' place [ my family home ] in Osaka.
I visited my parent's home (the home belonging to your parents -unless you have more than one set of parents!!) or I visited my family home in Osaka
F: Oh, are you from Osaka? I didn't know that [ it ].
Oh, I didn't know you were fro
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Hi,
Here's my version.
No. 1
M: I visited my parents in Osaka last week.
F: Oh, are you from Osaka? I didn't know that.
M: Didn't I tell you? I thought you knew.
F: No. How many people in your family? / Do you have any brothers or sisters?
No. 2 On the freeway
Here's my version.
No. 1
M: I visited my parents in Osaka last week.
F: Oh, are you from Osaka? I didn't know that.
M: Didn't I tell you? I thought you knew.
F: No. How many people in your family? / Do you have any brothers or sisters?
No. 2 On the freeway
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